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Hexia Posted: 2011-04-02 03:07 Reply | Quote
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#15212
This theme is short, but I like it. :D
(this is a simple VRC7, I haven't bothered with customs yet.)
This theme will be used in the background of the first level (war game)

1. do you like it.
2. do you like it.
3. do you REALLY like it.



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Posted: 2011-04-02 03:08 Reply | Quote
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4

Posted: 2011-04-02 03:10 Reply | Quote
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4?

Posted: 2011-04-02 03:11 Reply | Quote
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The tune could use a little bit more harmony (chords & stuff), but you're off to a good start.

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Posted: 2011-04-02 03:45 Reply | Quote
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I see improvements compared to your other songs. Personally I'm not a fan of the B-4 going the the C-4.

Posted: 2011-04-02 05:37 Reply | Quote
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Very much improved. I like you using 40rows per pattern.

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I'm with jrlepage on this; there is a definite need for improvement, but not as much in terms of harmony as in terms of note timing. This said, it's still a great improvement from the other songs. I'd give it a 1.

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Posted: 2011-04-03 08:24 Reply | Quote
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One of the biggest problems with your songs seems to be that you use chords that sound bad.
When people cringe at the playing of certain notes, it is a problem.

All I did was change a couple B-4s to C-4s and there is drastic improvement.

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Posted: 2011-04-03 16:10 Reply | Quote
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1. do you like it.
2. do you like it.
3. do you REALLY like it.


no.

well atleast its better then deadmau5

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I just heard it as deceptive secondary dominants.

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nintendude8 wrote:
well at least its better then deadmau5


It sounds like you secretly like deadmau5 at the rate you keep repeating this quote.

Plus, there are finally some forum rules up here, man.

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oh shite
thanks for mentioning.
and no i do not like deadmau5

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