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My First Two Songs! Posted: 2015-03-06 06:36  (Last Edited: 2015-03-06 16:05) Reply | Quote
Space_Platypus

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After much work, I've finally created two songs in Famitracker!

Graveyard-The first song I made. As the name implies, I think it would fit well in a cemetery or other haunted setting.

Town-My first foray into DPCM. I imagined it playing in something like a Medieval market, hence the name.

Do you have anything I can improve on?

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first_two_songs.ftm (36 Kb)
Posted: 2015-03-06 06:42 Reply | Quote
potentialing

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Hey! Before we can do that, can you upload the FTM or NSF?
Posted: 2015-03-06 08:59 Reply | Quote
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"New forum software coming soon," said JSR.

We never got it. Don't feel too bad about that blunder, OP - I'm guessing you clicked 'Browse' once per file and didn't click Upload. It -should- have worked, but it didn't, because this forum's backend blows. You gotta hit an extra button after choosing your files.
Posted: 2015-03-06 16:12 Reply | Quote
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Sorry about that! I'm new to the site, so I didn't understand that particular part. I've edited the original post to include the .ftm now.
Posted: 2015-03-06 17:53 Reply | Quote
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Not bad for your first! It has all the essential parts of a song: the melody, the harmony, the bass, and the percussion

That said, I see a few issues right away. You really don't have much going on melodically, and the bass clashes with the harmony. But who am I to talk, I've never released any of my songs, that takes guts.
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Posted: 2015-03-07 05:41  (Last Edited: 2015-03-12 00:43) Reply | Quote
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Thanks for the suggestions! I'll make sure to improve the songs and re-release them when I get the chance.

UPDATE-Well, the songs have been edited. Here they are! Have they been improved?

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Posted: 2015-03-29 03:19 Reply | Quote
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Well, the songs have been edited. Here they are! Have they been improved?

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