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(2A03) A Snowy Village Posted: 2014-02-05 05:59  (Last Edited: 2014-02-05 19:26) Reply | Quote
Shywolf



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BGM for a village in snow, full of people who keep on working hard despite the weather. Question: does this sound like a town theme? Reason I ask is because it's a bit more "active" than a typical town theme...

Anyway, enjoy.


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Posted: 2014-02-05 17:55 Reply | Quote
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To me it does sound like a town theme, but I don't find it more "active" than others. Still, very nice.

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Posted: 2014-02-05 19:28 Reply | Quote
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Thanks for that.

Posted: 2014-02-06 01:08 Reply | Quote
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This definitely sounds town-ish to me. It's a really good tune as well.

The only two thing I didn't like about the tune were the vibratos and the piano instrument. The vibratos just sound really strange to me, and I think it is because they only bend down instead of bending both up and down, making them odd.
The piano instrument also bothered me a little. The pitch envelope you put on it made it sound distorted, and the volume envelope's fadeout is never fully heard in the tune, but the release is. To my ears this sounds really weird. I also find the fact that the piano instrument has an attack strange.

I edited these parts (The vibratos and the piano) to make it more listenable to me, but otherwhise I didn't touch it. See attached FTM.

Other than the two things I adressed above, this is an exellent tune that would fit perfectly as a town theme. Keep up the good work!


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Posted: 2014-02-06 01:38  (Last Edited: 2014-02-06 01:42) Reply | Quote
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I think it's perfect for a town. I also don't hear it as busier than a usual town tune. Just a great track. Are you working on an ost?

Also I DID hear a good difference in the edited version.

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Posted: 2014-02-06 18:56 Reply | Quote
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[quote=moviemovies1]The vibratos just sound really strange to me, and I think it is because they only bend down instead of bending both up and down, making them odd.[/quote]
I'll admit I didn't actually know how to make them bend both up and down, so I just left them as is. Will keep this in mind for the future.

[quote=moviemovies1]The piano instrument also bothered me a little. The pitch envelope you put on it made it sound distorted, and the volume envelope's fadeout is never fully heard in the tune, but the release is. ...I also find the fact that the piano instrument has an attack strange.[/quote]
The pitch and volume envelopes were both there to try to make it sound more realistic (unsuccessfully, it seems). I'll keep experimenting. Your edit does certainly sound better overall.

[quote=Fezuke]Are you working on an ost?[/quote]
Nope. Just trying to write different kinds of tunes.


Thanks, guys, for the compliments and feedback overall.

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