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Stardust (VRC6) Posted: 2014-01-30 03:55 Reply | Quote
JKLOL

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#54022
Some original work for a new album that i'm making.

I'm actually pretty proud of this work. Yes, I realize that it's a bit repetitive, but there will be more added onto it once i get the proper equipment (like a microkorg with vocoder for vocals).

What did you think?

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Posted: 2014-01-30 18:01 Reply | Quote
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The sliding arps are very anamaguchi. Not bad.

I think the 2a03 pulse 1 and 2 are a bit too loud the whole time. Personally i'd double the bassline up on the triangle, instead of just using it for kicks. Would make the whole thing a bit meatier.

Nice work man.

Posted: 2014-01-31 00:20 Reply | Quote
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You're a lot better at originals than covers, but...

Very repetitive, though I understand that repetitiveness (to a degree) is part of the pseudo-vocal style of this song, so you're off the hook for that. Drums could've done with less boringness.

And, I said this to DJizzer, so I'm going to be fair and say it to someone who isn't over-loved as well. You went to break a little often, and too many of your breaks were nearly identical. And the other one was just a break bridge.

And, while it's not a big issue to me, someone might as well pick at it, because there's a lot of people who will get angry over it. Generic and repetitive chord structure.

Posted: 2014-01-31 00:31 Reply | Quote
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#54052
Very nice! I agree with the whole repetitiveness thing, as well as the breaks, but otherwise, great work!

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