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Original piece (VRC6) Posted: 2013-12-07 06:07

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lazor

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#52855

Here's an original piece I made. Some constructive criticism would be appreciated.

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Posted: 2013-12-08 02:17

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CastleMania

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#52872

I really like it! Good job.

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Posted: 2013-12-08 06:56 (Last Edited: 2013-12-08 06:57)

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robro

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Ya this is cool. I like all the arps and harmony. The feelings it evokes are similar to some of the tracks on Endless Fantasy; that blend of fun and nostalgia and melancholy.

As far as crits go, well, it starts a bit slow. I didn't find it very interesting until the fifth frame. The percussion is the weakest part. There needs to be some more variety of sounds there and use of volume control to give it more "feel" and dynamics.

Other than that it's very good, I like it.

Posted: 2013-12-08 07:35

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TEHMEGAMASTAH

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#52876

I agree with Robro, and I made a quick edit to the percussion up to frame 05. Hopefully this helps you improve.

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Posted: 2013-12-10 23:35

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Wow, nice song!

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