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The Great Battle/Der Grosser Kämpf (VRC7) Posted: 2013-11-21 23:06  (Last Edited: 2013-11-23 06:12) Reply(Locked)
GrosserMan



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#52491
Here is my work.

Took me 4 days to complete. But the song short, like I intended it to be.

Please critise my work.

Posted: 2013-11-21 23:51 Reply(Locked)
SoltIW



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#52494
Please, Thom. Read the rules before making a new account. You're not supposed to tell us that you're who you are if you've been banned. It was only possibly okay for Mr_Master because he couldn't log in, for reasons I can't for the life of me remember, but you were banned. Alternate accounts is not okay for banned people.

Anyways, it's chaotic, dissonant, and inconsistent. I'd take care of the inconsistency first if I were you, because chaos and dissonance can be done well with ease, while inconsistency can only truly be pulled off by people good at such, and you are not.

Posted: 2013-11-22 00:31  (Last Edited: 2013-11-22 00:31) Reply(Locked)
GrosserMan



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#52496
Well, what parts are incosistant? Telling me something wrong won't without some direction won't help me unfortunately, because I don't know what's wrong(except for the volume slides).

Posted: 2013-11-22 02:36 Reply(Locked)
SoltIW



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#52497
Well, all of it. It doesn't follow itself, it sounds like it's always trying to be something that it wasn't five seconds ago, what with the full switch in genres in the first few seconds, and then the jarring switch back. There's also a painful inconsistency between trying to sound happy and trying to sound frantic, with no proper middleground achieved.

Posted: 2013-11-22 03:42 Reply(Locked)
GrosserMan



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#52498
I figured that's what you were talking about. It wasn't real intentional, I just came up with what ever I was humming at the time. Maybe when my hands stop hurting me, I can turn those two sections into two different songs, but that will have to wait until I start back up my keyboard playing.

Posted: 2013-11-22 06:33  (Last Edited: 2013-11-22 06:34) Reply(Locked)
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#52500
Ban evading is against the rules.

Breaking the rules is grounds for a ban if the incident is serious enough.

You previously broke the rules in a manner many found unacceptable.

See where I'm going here?

Posted: 2013-11-22 06:49 Reply(Locked)
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I guess I didn't read the rules completely through, cause I never saw that part... I posted one time I was banned on two different accounts (albeit, I was learning how to forum. This was my first one. People thought I was trolling, and I just didn't know what to do. Sorry about that.) and no one said anything about that.

As for the song, not bad. I never really liked the vrc7 chip, except the one time I was able to get it to work for me. And I wish I did it in a different chip, too. xD

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Posted: 2013-11-22 19:10 Reply(Locked)
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Some things are better left unsaid..........

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Posted: 2013-11-23 06:13  (Last Edited: 2013-11-23 06:14) Reply(Locked)
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I was prepared to unban Thom if he asked nicely, but since he went out of his way to piss me off by evading ban, I guess that's not going to happen.

It amuses me how people never, ever learn.

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