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Well, I'm not the best to give advice, but I think that some slight vibrato for some of those long notes might sound better. This would make them feel less plain in terms of sound.
The song is good as it is now. Perhaps some improvements would be okay, though there are many things I consider to be right, like the volume balance, so there's not much you can do actually. Try some vibrato and see what comes out!
Vibrato on those pulse leads would help immensely. Other than that, well done!
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It's better, though I would say that maybe they could have a balance between bending up and down. Still, as it is now it's pretty good and sounds better, though some of the longer notes still have a plain feeling, which is where you may want to apply just a slight vibrato, so it doesn't have the same constant sound. It's nice and better than before.
That one long 50% pulse near the beginning really should have vibrato that starts off very subtle and progressively increases like a person singing a long note. It just sounds so plain for too long.