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And the world also starts today (N163) Posted: 2013-07-09 14:42 Reply | Quote
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#49172
One of the longest modules I've made.


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Posted: 2013-07-09 15:23  (Last Edited: 2013-07-09 16:26) Reply | Quote
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#49173
Good!

(yeah i'm sorry for not giving u any constructive criticism ;3)

Posted: 2013-07-09 15:30 Reply | Quote
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Good!

Posted: 2013-07-11 19:19 Reply | Quote
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#49232
Chi goes

this actually sounds really good

Posted: 2013-07-11 20:40  (Last Edited: 2013-07-11 20:41) Reply | Quote
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Oh, DjJizzer. You never cease to amaze. This sounds really nice! Well done! A truly good job!

EDIT: We all suck at constructive criticism...

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Posted: 2013-07-11 23:05  (Last Edited: 2013-07-11 23:32) Reply | Quote
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Constructive criticism is not needed in this case. Actually maybe one thing. Please put your name and year created. I think it's important to do so IMO.

Very good sir! Love all your stuff.


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Posted: 2013-07-11 23:19  (Last Edited: 2013-07-11 23:19) Reply | Quote
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CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM ALERT there's a few chord progressions I'm not too sure about (like the fourth chord in frame 05 and the third chord in frame 07, amongst others). But overall I'd say this is very well engineered and makes for a very catchy tune. Good job! :D

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Posted: 2013-07-11 23:34 Reply | Quote
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Oh Mr.Dissection.....You're evil I tell ya. Did it really bother you as you were listening to it? Or did you mute all channels and start nitpicking? Just curious.

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Posted: 2013-07-12 00:10 Reply | Quote
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Yeah it bothers me.

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Posted: 2013-07-12 01:29  (Last Edited: 2013-07-12 02:04) Reply | Quote
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This song makes my brain smile. I really like it, like most of your stuff. Keep it up!

EDIT: I dunno if this was intentional, but in frame 26 the Axx command for the 2nd channel is canceled, and I really liked the echo that was written there. Just wanted to point that out. Still an amazing song.

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Posted: 2013-07-12 03:26 Reply | Quote
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This is so nice! I absolutely love it

Posted: 2013-07-12 08:58 Reply | Quote
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[quote=DR0PB33T]I dunno if this was intentional, but in frame 26 the Axx command for the 2nd channel is canceled[/quote]

crap.

also - it's time to ruin everything: this is a cover.

i should've said that in the first place

Posted: 2013-07-12 09:39 Reply | Quote
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[quote=DjJizzer5]it's time to ruin everything: this is a cover.[/quote][url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=cBJMjyHLZTE]DOKI

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Posted: 2013-07-12 11:34  (Last Edited: 2013-07-12 11:41) Reply | Quote
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[quote=DjJizzer5][quote=DR0PB33T]I dunno if this was intentional, but in frame 26 the Axx command for the 2nd channel is canceled[/quote]

crap.

also - it's time to ruin everything: this is a cover.

i should've said that in the first place[/quote]In frame 37 - 38 there is probably another blunder with the Axx command. It does not get canceled before the echo in Pulse 2 in frame 38, so only the first note plays. I'm guessing it should be canceled since it has been for Pulse 1 just a few rows above it.

Huh, I really thought this was an original at first. Oh, well.

I am guessing you took some liberties with the tempo, I could not sync them up properly, your version is way faster from what I can tell. Other than that, the accuracy of the notation and instrumentation just makes my mind explode. A very well made cover you have there!

Also, freaking great choice of what to cover! I had never heard this tune before but it is great. Trumpets always makes everything better! (coming from an average trumpet player, LOL)

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Posted: 2013-07-12 13:11 Reply | Quote
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getting the tempo right in famitracker is impossible, mind you.

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