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My 1st cover Posted: 2013-06-20 19:04 Reply | Quote
Bl4cK_M0on

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Hi everyone! I'm new here and I bring a VRC6 cover of Mario Kart 64 Rainbow Road to you, I hope you'll like it.


Posted: 2013-06-20 19:06 Reply | Quote
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Well, most new people necro-post before doing anything else on the forums. You, sir, have, instead of necro-posting, entered the forum with a great cover of a great song. My only complaint is that sometimes it is too high pitched.

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Posted: 2013-06-20 19:17 Reply | Quote
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Let's say I wanted to do it properly for the first ^^
Thanks for the feedback

Posted: 2013-06-20 22:59 Reply | Quote
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And I'm afraid I neglected to tell you "Welcome to the forums!"

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Posted: 2013-06-21 01:09 Reply | Quote
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I also want to welcome you. Your track sounds very well overall, though the noise channel sounds very disrupting in the frames marked with a 01 in the pattern editor (those are: frames 05, 07, 0E and 10). It happens precisely when the noise channel plays a C-# note with instrument 08. What you should do is either lower the volume of those notes or replace the instrument and use another one there. Otherwise, this is very well done for being your first cover. I hope you keep tracking because I would be interested to see you improve within the next months.

And that's all. Welcome to the forums! I hope you have a pleasant time here.

Posted: 2013-06-21 01:39 Reply | Quote
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I agree with Mr_Master, here. It can get really annoying when you're just listening to a good song, then you hear a weird, wet sounding knife cutting through a zipper(what?)

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Posted: 2013-06-21 11:44 Reply | Quote
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I made some readjustments and I think that should make it now
And thanks for the welcome


Posted: 2013-06-21 17:45 Reply | Quote
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Welcome to the forums, Black! (Can I call you that?) This is a good cover, period, never mind a first! Three suggestions, though:

1. The Triangle has only 2 volume settings: on (anything other than 0) and off (0). So putting in a decay will have no effect until it goes to 0. However, the DPCM delta counter will change the volume of the Triangle and the Noise channels, but you seem to have tilted the samples already, so I'll leave you alone about that.

2. It does sound a bit whiny, but that may be because I'm listening through laptop speakers. (And I'm listening to the fixed version.)

3. Consider strengthening the DPCM drums with noise parts as well. However, your drums seem to be quite strong for DPCM, but you might want to try it to see how well it works out.

That's it for the nitpicks. Overall, good work, would love to see more! Toodles!

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Posted: 2013-06-21 19:57 Reply | Quote
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Good job on the edit, Sounds much much better. Good call Mr.Master.

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Posted: 2013-06-21 21:15 Reply | Quote
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I agree, sure sounds much better. Good job on this!

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