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the BITter end Posted: 2013-05-06 20:36 Reply | Quote
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#47443
Tried doing an original. not my first.
kommantz? krit-shotz?


also, if you're gonna edit or tweak it, use the 4.2 modified version as that doesnt have the namco noise. also, i wouldnt be able to open it again if it were to be edited with the regular 4.2

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Posted: 2013-05-06 21:15 Reply | Quote
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First thought, have the 2A03 pulse channels at least be octaves or have one be an echo, instead of the exact same thing
Frame 08 to 0B could have some very neat harmonies there! Consider that please
This does have a lot of repetition, especially in the bass and percussion sections, you might want to try and just improvise something every now and then just to twist things up!
The ending is ok, and overall it is a cool piece, pretty spacey! I think you have some neat ideas, but I would say you need to work on it some more. Keep up the good work.

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Posted: 2013-05-06 21:25  (Last Edited: 2013-05-06 21:45) Reply | Quote
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[quote=Doxic]First thought, have the 2A03 pulse channels at least be octaves [/quote]
what do you mean? octaves higher? lower?

[quote=Doxic]or have one be an echo, instead of the exact same thing[/quote]
point me to the frames you think are repetetive

[quote=Doxic]Frame 08 to 0B could have some very neat harmonies there! Consider that please [/quote]
thanks

[quote=Doxic]This does have a lot of repetition, especially in the bass and percussion sections, you might want to try and just improvise something every now and then just to twist things up![/quote]
im sorry but thats how things come out for me, repetetive. :/ dunno why


[quote=Doxic]The ending is ok,[/quote]
that could've been better actually

[quote=Doxic]and overall it is a cool piece, pretty spacey! I think you have some neat ideas,[/quote]
thanks

[quote=Doxic]but I would say you need to work on it some more. [/quote]
ill try to

[quote=Doxic]Keep up the good work.[/quote]
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Posted: 2013-05-06 21:42 Reply | Quote
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[quote=Turbonaator][quote=Doxic]First thought, have the 2A03 pulse channels at least be octaves [/quote]
what do you mean? octaves higher? lower?
[/quote]
Your call! Try both and see which sounds better!
[quote=Turbonaator][quote=Doxic]or have one be an echo, instead of the exact same thing[/quote]
point me to the frames you think are repetetive
[/quote]
I was saying instead of the pulse channels being octaves you might want to have them be echos, and this is for frames 00-07

[quote=Turbonaator][quote=Doxic]Frame 08 to 0B could have some very neat harmonies there! Consider that please [/quote]
thanks
[/quote]
Clarification: I would like you to add some harmonies in the 2A03 pulse channels, 3rds, 4ths, etc, whatever sounds best.

[quote=Turbonaator][quote=Doxic]This does have a lot of repetition, especially in the bass and percussion sections, you might want to try and just improvise something every now and then just to twist things up![/quote]
im sorry but thats how things come out for me, repetetive. :/ dunno why
[/quote]

It is easy to do, I'll admit. What I do is I try to is develop a solo, from a few copied frames and then adapt my other channels to the solo, and then make sure everything moves and flows smoothly!



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Posted: 2013-05-06 22:01 Reply | Quote
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[quote=Doxic][quote=Turbonaator][quote=Doxic]First thought, have the 2A03 pulse channels at least be octaves [/quote]
what do you mean? octaves higher? lower?
[/quote]
Your call! Try both and see which sounds better!
[quote=Turbonaator][quote=Doxic]or have one be an echo, instead of the exact same thing[/quote]
point me to the frames you think are repetetive
[/quote]
I was saying instead of the pulse channels being octaves you might want to have them be echos, and this is for frames 00-07

[quote=Turbonaator][quote=Doxic]Frame 08 to 0B could have some very neat harmonies there! Consider that please [/quote]
thanks
[/quote]
Clarification: I would like you to add some harmonies in the 2A03 pulse channels, 3rds, 4ths, etc, whatever sounds best.

[quote=Turbonaator][quote=Doxic]This does have a lot of repetition, especially in the bass and percussion sections, you might want to try and just improvise something every now and then just to twist things up![/quote]
im sorry but thats how things come out for me, repetetive. :/ dunno why
[/quote]

It is easy to do, I'll admit. What I do is I try to is develop a solo, from a few copied frames and then adapt my other channels to the solo, and then make sure everything moves and flows smoothly!

[/quote]

tried something then. i didnt know what to do with 08 09 0a 0b frames.

something about the song: it was originally going to use the dpcm channel for drums [u]and[/u] bass. but i couldnt think of a way to fit them together, so i attempted to engineer a namco bass instrument from the dpcm bass that was going to be used.

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