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Nuclear Winter [Original - WinterChip 8] Posted: 2013-01-13 04:43 Reply | Quote
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#43481
enjoy

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Posted: 2013-01-13 06:35 Reply | Quote
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YAY FIRST POST.



Just kidding.

Anyway. this song is, so far, as I have not listened long. very good. I personally don't like the bell-like lead, as it seems a bit too harsh. Of course, it's a simple matter of opinion. Other than that one thing, it sounds great. As per your usual.

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[quote=CheeseGuy99]YAY FIRST POST.



Just kidding.

Anyway. this song is, so far, as I have not listened long. very good. I personally don't like the bell-like lead, as it seems a bit too harsh. Of course, it's a simple matter of opinion. Other than that one thing, it sounds great. As per your usual.[/quote]

Thank you so much! ;D I'm assuming you mean the bells I put on channel 5-6? I can understand that honestly, I was worried it was too much in some spots.

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Posted: 2013-01-13 19:59 Reply | Quote
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This is great work. It sounds kind of ethereal up until about half way through then it starts to sound kind of menacing/mechanical. I enjoyed the bells as leads, it's not something you hear often. The song has variety, but still sounds like it's all part of the same bigger picture. The last two frames say "some type of mutated creepy monster is gonna kill me while ashes are falling on my head".

Posted: 2013-01-13 21:07  (Last Edited: 2013-01-13 21:14) Reply | Quote
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You've got a few hanging 4xx commands:

pulse 1, frame 02, row 48 (0x30)
pulse 1, frame 08, row 6 (although this one kinda looks like it was intentional)
pulse 1 & 2, frames 12-16 (0x0C-0x10), row 24 (0x18)

Might wanna fix that and resubmit. ( -w-)

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Posted: 2013-01-13 21:23  (Last Edited: 2013-01-13 21:24) Reply | Quote
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[quote=jrlepage]You've got a few hanging 4xx commands:

pulse 1, frame 02, row 48 (0x30)
pulse 1, frame 08, row 6 (although this one kinda looks like it was intentional)
pulse 1 & 2, frames 12-16 (0x0C-0x10), row 24 (0x1

Might wanna fix that and resubmit. ( -w-)[/quote]

The only one I missed was Frame 02, thank you for pointing that out jrlepage!

(the others I left on purpose)

Also thank you for such nice comments Jim! :3

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Posted: 2013-01-13 21:34 Reply | Quote
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The last ones don't really make sense because you're trying to apply an already existing vibrato to the notes in frames 13-16. But hey, your call. ( -w-)

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[quote=jrlepage]The last ones don't really make sense because you're trying to apply an already existing vibrato to the notes in frames 13-16. But hey, your call. ( -w-)[/quote]

I misunderstood I think, The last one started as a mistake, but the sound of it grew on me, and I just left it, I never put the 4xx commands in because I'm extremely forgetful and really doesn't give the same effect one way or another?

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Posted: 2013-01-15 17:08 Reply | Quote
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[quote=Doxic]I'm assuming you mean the bells I put on channel 5-6? I can understand that honestly, I was worried it was too much in some spots.[/quote]

Yes, that's what i meant. It grows on me, though.

Posted: 2013-01-15 17:47 Reply | Quote
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[quote=CheeseGuy99][quote=Doxic]I'm assuming you mean the bells I put on channel 5-6? I can understand that honestly, I was worried it was too much in some spots.[/quote]

Yes, that's what i meant. It grows on me, though.[/quote]

AHh ok, You know that seems to be the general opinion for all my work, it's a little weird at first but grows on you ;P

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Posted: 2013-01-15 23:44 Reply | Quote
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Well, that happens, that's my own general opinion of all work I do, and that's why I generally don't post any works on the forums, just going around, commenting, criticizing, and listening. Don't be like me.

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