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I think the biggest weakness here is the orchestra hits. They sound strange and have no impact. Perhaps they should be DPCM. That would also free up Pulse 2 to be used for a haunting echo or something.
The percussion isn't very strong here either. Perhaps you should use some DPCM for that too (you can make pre-mixed samples with your ochestra hits if you like).