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MMC5 Original (WIP?) Posted: 2012-10-31 09:29

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golfertrytek

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#41439

I started working on this song only a couple of days ago, and have gotten it to near completion, but I feel it has potential to go to the next level.

I was hoping you talented individuals could assist/advise me on how to finish/polish/extend the song.

I am also taking suggestions for names if anybody has any good ones.

Thank you!

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Posted: 2012-10-31 16:01

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#41449

For some reason this makes me think me of an end-of-level-baddie track from TMNT (I haven't played since I was little, so I don't remember the actual tunes).

For this reason I'm going to suggest the title "Bebop's Revenge".

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Posted: 2012-11-01 09:07 (Last Edited: 2012-11-01 09:08)

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#41508

It's not too bad. I really think you should get some DPCM drums and get a bass in your tune. I think the lack of bass is what makes this sound so incomplete. Other than that I liked most of it.

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Posted: 2012-11-04 09:16

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#41731

I messed around with it for a while, and this is the best I could come up with. Whatever I put in the triangle just didn't seem to work.

Hopefully it sounds better, and if not could you maybe do a line or two to give me an idea of what would sound good and I could go from there.

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Posted: 2012-11-04 19:42

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#41742

Personally, I really like this piece.

As to development, I just have one comment about a phrase - rows 0C - 0F. I think you could do more with that section, if just double the length, and build up the lead a little before it drops off, There it kinda feels like you start a new segment and drop it before it goes anywhere.

Other than that a good job.

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