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FamiPunk - Gameboydynamic Posted: 2012-10-21 17:29 Reply | Quote
FamiPunk221



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#40859
Hello everyone! I am new here but i want you to show one of my projects in Famitracker called (see headline)

Tell me what ya' think about it!


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Posted: 2012-10-21 19:10 Reply | Quote
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#40863
It's good, but two main things:

1. I'm impressed by the DPCM bell sample, but it does seem a little jarring when it starts again. Maybe you could find a way to fade it out a little? I suppose the Zxx effect might work.

2. You have at least 5 channels playing the main melody. That's a little over-powering, so maybe you could enhance the bass a little with the Triangle, and leave the first two Pulses blank until the guitar section? It's up to you.

Also, feel free to check out my cover (Track 2 in the attached module).

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Posted: 2012-10-21 19:56  (Last Edited: 2012-10-21 19:57) Reply | Quote
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There could of been more base. Instead of having the saw wave play the melody it could of worked really well playing the bass notes. Also the volume in the melody could be a little more stable. Some parts of the melody are a little too accented in my opinion. It's decent, just could use some cleaning up.

Posted: 2012-10-21 23:32  (Last Edited: 2012-10-22 11:59) Reply | Quote
FamiPunk221



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Well, I used a lil' Compressor effect on the other parts, and: I might edit it a bit of your help.

Thank you!


P.S: I allow you to edit the song so that I can see what I can improve to my version.

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