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Anthem of Alzheimer Posted: 2012-09-17 18:38 Reply | Quote
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#39647
What I've been working on for the past couple of weeks. The name refers to the song's progressively radical instrument change and note progression. My main influence was "Everything in Its Own Place" by Radiohead, even though this tune sounds nothing like it.

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Posted: 2012-09-17 19:56  (Last Edited: 2012-09-17 19:57) Reply | Quote
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It's not bad but it's quite unsatisfying. I'm always expecting a sort of drop (for lack of a better term) and then a more intense section, but it never comes.

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Posted: 2012-09-18 01:29 Reply | Quote
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Where do you feel that in the song? I could add more intense parts in the middle around frame 10, where I thought it was a bit simplistic.

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Posted: 2012-09-18 02:44  (Last Edited: 2012-09-18 02:52) Reply | Quote
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I agree with Interrobang, the ENTIRE song feels like one big ol' build up, and when I finally felt like it was going somewhere (at frame 17) it ends my idea would be after frame 0F (or maybe even earlier) have it come in louder and faster with heavy drums/noise and bass

I did just a little example to show you what I mean

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Posted: 2012-09-18 03:55 Reply | Quote
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#39680
While not as good as that example, here's this instead:



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Posted: 2012-09-18 04:16 Reply | Quote
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Amazing!
Very much improved sir

Only note I have is make the 2A03 Pulse and Saw channels on frames 04-07 a bit quieter, maybe use A10 and A01 for a nice fade in/out combo

Other than that it's alot better :D

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Posted: 2012-09-18 04:41 Reply | Quote
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more revisions~

Man I love the echo effect. Also y/n on the triangle drop at the beginning? I thought the song started too abruptly.

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Posted: 2012-09-18 04:47 Reply | Quote
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The intro reminded me of Cutman's stage music from the first Megaman for some odd reason.

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Tri drop sounds ok to me, good improvements man

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Posted: 2012-09-18 09:14 Reply | Quote
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I'd have to say, this is my favorite work of yours up to date. You also have a very recognizable sound, I guess you found your signature instruments.

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