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TRB6000 (WIP maybe?) Posted: 2012-09-16 06:13  (Last Edited: 2012-09-16 06:38) Reply | Quote
LikeACloud



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#39596
Any advice? Anything at all? Again, please be as harsh as possible. I had a lot of fun making this one though!


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Posted: 2012-09-16 06:24 Reply | Quote
cak

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#39598
no ftm
Posted: 2012-09-16 06:38 Reply | Quote
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#39600
I'm a dolt.

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Posted: 2012-09-16 06:47 Reply | Quote
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#39601
It was pretty good, I think it was just me, but the leads didn't see to stand out, they just seemed to be very dull to me

I did like the bass and drums though, it could have been a little punchy but thats (again) my taste
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Posted: 2012-09-16 07:06  (Last Edited: 2012-09-16 07:10) Reply | Quote
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Mostly this sounds really good. I'd probably ditch the first frame and have the noise come in on the third frame (or alternately, leave the first frame and have the sawtooth come in instead). And the ending is abrupt, but I suppose that's because the piece isn't quite finished.
Posted: 2012-09-16 07:23 Reply | Quote
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[quote=cak]Mostly this sounds really good. I'd probably ditch the first frame and have the noise come in on the third frame (or alternately, leave the first frame and have the sawtooth come in instead). And the ending is abrupt, but I suppose that's because the piece isn't quite finished.[/quote]

Actually it's a fade out, but I kind of cheated and did that in Audacity, shh.

Posted: 2012-09-16 07:25 Reply | Quote
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drums are very weird. you know, sometimes the most basic things are the best. but i like the rest.

thumbs up.
Posted: 2012-09-16 07:49 Reply | Quote
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[quote=DjJizzer5]drums are very weird. you know, sometimes the most basic things are the best. but i like the rest.

thumbs up.[/quote]

How are they weird? Just so I could note it for the future that is.

Posted: 2012-09-16 08:06  (Last Edited: 2012-09-16 08:07) Reply | Quote
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i dont have the words. so let me show you how do i see the percussion in it.

oh, and also i made sawtooth notes to be longer, because these didnt had a good sound. they were too short for a bass and made kind of ugly space between notes.

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Posted: 2012-09-16 08:41 Reply | Quote
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#39610
Oh, you're right. That's far more driving!

Posted: 2012-09-16 09:52 Reply | Quote
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#39612
The song was just begging me to make a very minor edit that I think helps it out.

Other than that I thought the song was great, it sounds a lot like something Interrobangpie would come up with.

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Posted: 2012-09-16 11:00 Reply | Quote
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[quote=golfertrytek]The song was just begging me to make a very minor edit that I think helps it out.

Other than that I thought the song was great, it sounds a lot like something Interrobangpie would come up with.[/quote]

Hell, that's great. I'm gonna edit it up sometime soon with these ideas in mind. Ya'll are the best.

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