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Two recent efforts (writing music is hard) Posted: 2012-09-13 22:02 Reply | Quote
robro

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#39495
Both of these were posted to the random doodles thread initially but I'm sure no one looked at the plethora of updates and edits I made after their initial postings so here they are in their "finished" forms.

Well, the first track, Porcelain Memories, is finished (it's supposed to be like a creepy music box, hence the phrase just repeating itself) but the second track, Trials and Tribalism, while it does loop quite nicely, I would like to turn into a complete song with more parts and and ending. However, I'm kinda stuck creatively so maybe you could offer some advice on where to take it? Or not, whatever.

Anyway, thanks for listening.


Posted: 2012-09-14 05:26 Reply | Quote
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I agree writing music is hard :P

Solid songs though, I liked them

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Posted: 2012-09-14 09:26  (Last Edited: 2012-09-14 09:27) Reply | Quote
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It's hard to help someone out on a direction to go, because you'd ask many different musicians and you'd get a different answer each time. I honestly feel that trials and Tribalism is complete as is. Remember, the beauty of NES music is that there is no length rule. There are many short songs in many games out there. I think Porcelain Memories is what you should be expanding. I could see it go somewhere. You've got a good intro right now.

I really like both of them BTW.

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Posted: 2012-09-14 15:09 Reply | Quote
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writing music is indeed hard

especially when you are as tone deaf as i am

good work though

Posted: 2012-09-15 00:04 Reply | Quote
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Very nice. I like the technique used in the porcelain memories song with the channels.

Posted: 2012-09-15 06:39 Reply | Quote
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i remember these.

i liked them alot. random doodles are not noticable tho

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