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My First Full Effort Posted: 2012-09-09 23:36  (Last Edited: 2012-09-09 23:36) Reply | Quote
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Heya guys. I did this piece like a month ago and it was my first accumulation of knowledge of Famitracker put into application. I'm trying to get better, so I thought I would sign up here and get some crit on this.

Be as nasty as you can


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Posted: 2012-09-09 23:52 Reply | Quote
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#39298
you can't put volume control on triangle

otherwise this is pretty awesome good job :D

Posted: 2012-09-09 23:54 Reply | Quote
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Ares64 wrote:
you can't put volume control on triangle

otherwise this is pretty awesome good job :D


You should have seen me while working on it. "Bah, why the hell won't the triangle get softer?!?!". Haha. Thanks!

RE: My First Full Effort Posted: 2012-09-09 23:57 Reply | Quote
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LikeACloud wrote:
Be as nasty as you can.


This was terrible at being bad?

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Posted: 2012-09-10 00:05 Reply | Quote
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A little too nasty, no?

:P Thank you!

Posted: 2012-09-10 00:37 Reply | Quote
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May have just been me, but I could not hear that Saw, maybe try pumping that a little bit more next time :P

Other wise I really enjoyed it, good work man :D

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Posted: 2012-09-10 03:55 Reply | Quote
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Doxic wrote:
May have just been me, but I could not hear that Saw, maybe try pumping that a little bit more next time :P

Other wise I really enjoyed it, good work man :D


Yeah, you think? Over some notes I feel it's quite prominent, but over some you're right. I'll keep that in mind.

Posted: 2012-09-11 01:53 Reply | Quote
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Haha, I somehow managed to listen to this for half an hour straight without getting bored! Even at my music rehearsals I somehow found myself jamming out to this in my head. Thanks for sharing it! xD

Also, don't be afraid to turn up that Sawtooth volume! As for being nasty...I can't do that, so I'll just say "no" in hopes that disobedience counts to that.

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Xeradeux wrote:
Haha, I somehow managed to listen to this for half an hour straight without getting bored! Even at my music rehearsals I somehow found myself jamming out to this in my head. Thanks for sharing it! xD

Also, don't be afraid to turn up that Sawtooth volume! As for being nasty...I can't do that, so I'll just say "no" in hopes that disobedience counts to that.


Oh wow, that's awesome. I'm glad you enjoyed it. That really means a lot. I wouldn't think that people would be so kind here, haha.

Posted: 2012-09-11 23:40 Reply | Quote
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I had so much fun listening to this. I really like the arps + snare combo. Like the others, I agree that you need to make the sawtooth louder. It deserves to be heard!

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I had so much fun listening to this. I really like the arps + snare combo. Like the others, I agree that you need to make the sawtooth louder. It deserves to be heard!


Working on something now. The saw is definitely going up this time!

Posted: 2012-09-14 09:49 Reply | Quote
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Very nice track. As everyone pointed out, Saw should be louder.

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RE: My First Full Effort Posted: 2012-09-19 04:05 Reply | Quote
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Awesome beats without DPCM? Aliens.

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RE: My First Full Effort Posted: 2012-09-19 04:59  (Last Edited: 2012-09-19 04:59) Reply | Quote
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I've actually never used the DPCM channel for anything other than tempo changes and the D command haha. I should start doing that.

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