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Looking for feedback on a tune :) Posted: 2012-08-27 05:08  (Last Edited: 2012-08-28 03:12) Reply | Quote
AozoraOrigami

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#38706
Citrus Temple, any commentary?

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Posted: 2012-08-27 06:36 Reply | Quote
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Two problems with volume: a lot of the instruments are blaring at full volume and the triangle channel cannot have a volume envelope. It's either "on" (volume 1-15) or "off" (volume 0).

In addition, the sawtooth wave has freaky rules for its duty cycle (Vxx command) and you can study that [url=http://famitracker.com/wiki/index.php?title=Vxx#Sawtooth_usage_notes]here.

The song *is* good, though. I kinda like it. The chords work okay and the percussion works well. It just needs some fixes.

Citrus Temple, fixed-ish Posted: 2012-08-27 15:23  (Last Edited: 2012-08-27 15:24) Reply | Quote
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How is it like this?

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RE: Citrus Temple, fixed-ish Posted: 2012-08-28 00:50 Reply | Quote
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It's evolving pretty well. For example, I really liked the pulse waves in the background from frames 0A to 0D that weren't in the original.

Also, the volume control definitely is better. Much better. I listened to the original again without changing the volume on my computer, and my earbud practically blew my eardrum up. Now the it's easy to tell which sounds are lead and which sounds are not.
Keep up the good work!

Also, can we get some more feedback from other people? I'm not advanced enough to pick out small problems and there is probably still more room to improve, so maybe someone with a better trained ear will be able to identify more things and be able to teach you how to improve them.

Also, rename the thread to something that reflects the title of your work; it'll be more inviting so others will see your work. More listens = more feedback.

RE: Citrus Temple, fixed-ish Posted: 2012-08-28 03:11 Reply | Quote
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thank you ^_^ i'm fairly new to using famitracker, i've been using it since january but my computer broke down for a while but when i fixed it i tried to learn more of the effects, i have some of my songs on youtube if ya wanna hear them look up "aozoraorigami"

hmm i should rename it shouldn't i :P

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