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Original - What can I do with this? Posted: 2012-08-22 15:56  (Last Edited: 2012-08-22 15:57) Reply | Quote
Naff_Natty

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#38555
Here's an original tune of mine. I'm just not sure where or how to develop it to turn it into a complete tune, or where it needs tweaking. Any I ideas how I could progress?

Any constructive criticism welcome.


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Posted: 2012-08-22 20:23 Reply | Quote
DjJizzer5

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#38560
could use better instruments, rather than the default ones.

also it goes too long to actualy develop into something.

but its nice. kinda charming
Posted: 2012-08-23 01:59 Reply | Quote
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If I attempted using that chip, I'm sure I'd use the default instruments as well.

I really like this song though, default or not, it was enjoyable.
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Posted: 2012-08-23 08:58 Reply | Quote
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#38586
A really old Fun Factory song called 'I Wanna Be With You' popped in my head when I heard Frame 01. Yours is different, but I couldn't help hearing a resemblance in the first couple of notes.

I think it's an alright track, chill indeed.
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Posted: 2012-08-24 12:44 Reply | Quote
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#38614
Thanks guys! Fezuke, that organ melody is hardly the most original chord progression, I'm sure it sounds like a few things

What would you do with the instruments Jizzer? You mean tweak the waveforms? Aw, those poor old simple waveforms... Let me know if you have some ideas

Posted: 2012-08-27 01:22 Reply | Quote
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#38697
Try this for organam: 11 12 13 13 14 14 14 15 15 15 15 15 15 14 14 14 13 13 12 11 3 2 2 1 1 0 0 1 1 2 2 3

I dunno, maybe this for saw/skank: 15 14 13 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 8 8 9 9 10 10 11 11 12 12 13 13 14 14 15 15

Or this: 7 7 6 6 5 5 4 4 3 3 2 2 1 1 0 0 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15

Also, why does this sound like two notes at once?: 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 8 8 9 9 10 10 11 11 12 12 13 13 14 14 15 15

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