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First Song, Would Greatly Appreciate Criticism Posted: 2012-07-03 09:59  (Last Edited: 2012-07-03 10:02) Reply | Quote
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#36421
Hey! Before going into this, I'd like to point out I've already learned a lot more about what to and not to do since I wrote this, since I basically knew nothing of how Famitracker worked other than just the bare bones from tutorials. Hell, I STILL only know the basics, but at least I'm aware of the bigger things now. :P

Known issues with this work:
-The key wanders a tad in places.
-The middle is wonky, though I don't quite know why.
-I only used two channels for most of the song. I have learned now that this is generally a Bad Idea (TM).

Other than that, I look forward to your advice! I'm really glad to be a part of this community now that I know about it!

EDIT: I put this here instead of in the tiny bits thread because this is just shy of a minute and I actually spent a while on this, but I notice the file size is much smaller than most, so I apologize if this is technically in the wrong area.

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Posted: 2012-07-03 17:04 Reply | Quote
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I thought this looked familiar... I saw this back on CM.O (lurking), and I must say, this is a little better than the usual "first FT thing I made" songs we usually get around here. It has a visible structure, but the whole key thing is a factor in this. I guess what I'm trying to say is, it's not bad but could do with a little more.

I also see that you know what's wrong with it, and that's a huge step up from our usual newbies... so good for you.

AND WELCOME TO THE FORUMS.

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Posted: 2012-07-03 20:23 Reply | Quote
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[quote=Im_a_Track_Man]I thought this looked familiar... I saw this back on CM.O (lurking), and I must say, this is a little better than the usual "first FT thing I made" songs we usually get around here. It has a visible structure, but the whole key thing is a factor in this. I guess what I'm trying to say is, it's not bad but could do with a little more.

I also see that you know what's wrong with it, and that's a huge step up from our usual newbies... so good for you.

AND WELCOME TO THE FORUMS.[/quote]

Ah! I was wondering how much crossover from the Chip Music Online boards there was here.

I think I've just about got the key issues worked out by adding a third channel in, but it's still a day or two from being something I'm really proud of yet. (I'd like to get it to about twice the length, too.)

And thanks for your welcoming!

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