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Input needed. Posted: 2012-05-09 10:05 Reply | Quote
Wedge



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#34826
I would appreciate some criticism on this. I kind of think it changes too much too often...

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RE: Input needed. Posted: 2012-05-09 11:11 Reply | Quote
za909

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#34827
Frame 6 and 8 shouldn't be there.
Without those, it sounded a lot more stable, and not bad at all!
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Posted: 2012-05-09 20:17 Reply | Quote
Wedge



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Thanks!

Posted: 2012-05-09 20:58 Reply | Quote
Weirdbananas

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This is pretty cool! I like the messy style. Frame 6 and 8 should be there...

Posted: 2012-05-09 21:16 Reply | Quote
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I think that you could do with more pronounced pick ups in frames 5 and 7 into frames 6 and 8, and that would solve your problems. Also as frame 8 is half the length it jars a bit when we hit frame 9 and repeat the longer phrase - I think if you just played the second half of frame 9 it would sound better. Good job though, I like it!

Posted: 2012-05-23 02:24 Reply | Quote
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Sounds a little bit all over the place. Personally, I would take out frames 6 and 8. It would make the song more consistant while maintaining the overall feel.
Posted: 2012-05-23 05:07 Reply | Quote
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I'm with Weirdbananas on this one; music that has sections with off-kilter timing on purpose always merit a second listen. It always leaves me pondering "why did they choose to do that there?" and never fails to grab my attention.
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