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Runnig out of Resources [VRC6] Posted: 2012-03-31 19:40 Reply | Quote
skinnyhead2000

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#32495
Well this is my first original piece of this year, and probably my first decent original piece I've made, I kind of started this and ended up with three frames two weeks ago, and today I guess something clicked and I ended up finishing it. It's pretty short as well. Let me know what you guys think! Where can I improve?
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Posted: 2012-03-31 20:00  (Last Edited: 2012-03-31 20:01) Reply | Quote
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That's super catchy and neat!! Reminds me of Mega Man, slightly. It's a shame it's so short.

I think the main reason why it has to be so short is that the end of every phrase sounds like a conclusion, if that makes any sense.
Posted: 2012-03-31 20:02 Reply | Quote
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Thanks! I kind of wanted to add on to it and all, but I feel if I tied to it would just be milking it.
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Posted: 2012-03-31 23:41 Reply | Quote
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wow this song sucks why do you even try kid ♥♥♥
Posted: 2012-03-31 23:42 Reply | Quote
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[quote=Mex]wow this song sucks why do you even try kid ♥♥♥[/quote]

hey do u wan 2 fight i will fight u i will bring my gun i will shoot my gun at you iwill fight you
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Posted: 2012-03-31 23:43 Reply | Quote
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cum at me bro... dont bring a gun to a knife fite nugga....
Posted: 2012-03-31 23:45 Reply | Quote
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hey u know what i will even fight u w/ a pilow and u will still die n cry because ur weak and u cant even throw a punch and i will win in the fight and you will lose and i will won
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Posted: 2012-04-02 07:03 Reply | Quote
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I agree, it is just too short. Frame 0B could easily be continued! Needs more chord changes. Just add to the song, dude! I like what I hear so far!


Maybe it could use more bass?
Posted: 2012-04-02 20:13 Reply | Quote
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#32573
I made a quick attempt to extend it, but I don't know if it works or not. I was having trouble with percussion and arps, so I'll let you handle those.

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Posted: 2012-04-03 00:59 Reply | Quote
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This is technically longer. Apologies in advance.

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Posted: 2012-04-03 03:23 Reply | Quote
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Thanks for the extensions, guys! I like them both, but I ended up taking out the last two frames and I just made it loop. [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C95h_iIwovA]VID
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