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My first ever piece in FamiTracker Posted: 2012-03-25 19:50 Reply | Quote
Gorillabiscuits

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#32189
Hey, i've had little/no experience in FamiTracker but after getting acquainted with everything and trying some things out i've come out with this, which i call I.V.
I realise it's not great and there are a couple of flaws to it, and all criticism and improvements are welcome!
Please enjoy


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Posted: 2012-03-25 21:12 Reply | Quote
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#32195
It's pretty good for a first piece, but I would definitely suggest using some volume control.

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RE: My first ever piece in FamiTracker Posted: 2012-03-25 22:00 Reply | Quote
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#32198
You have a little bit of discord throughout your song, and you should try dimming down the volume on your Squares.

I like what you did with SQ1 and TRI.
The beat was also neat, it was a little different, especially towards the end.

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Posted: 2012-03-25 23:58 Reply | Quote
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Thanks for feedback! I've tried to sort out the problems, but as i say, i'm pretty new to this and have no real idea of how to go about fixing it now that it's done.

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