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first attempt at basically anything Posted: 2012-03-20 01:11 Reply | Quote
9orage

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#31951
been workin' on this for about two days, now, using it to get a hang of famitracker.

it would be cool if you fellas would give me some feedback and tips on how sound a bit more professional.

i'd appreciate it if you left your angry suits at home. ;D


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Posted: 2012-03-20 01:20 Reply | Quote
Eletious

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This is really cool, I like the FDS mallet instrument you used, really reminds me of my high school band's marimba.... Ah, fond memories...

This is really good! You didn't try to make it too complicated, and layered on parts a little bit, and it turned out really nice. If you want to be a little more professional... err.... I can't think of anything. It's not too loud (something I often forget about), so none of the parts really overpower the others, and each part gives it a nice touch. One note though: a C00 effect in the last row of the last frame will end the song there, if you so desire.

Posted: 2012-03-20 01:33 Reply | Quote
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oh man, that's such a great bit of news :D
thanks a ton, and thanks for the c00 tip. i think i'm going to leave it how it is, though, because i kind of like the triangle going out with ease.
thank you so much :D

Posted: 2012-03-20 01:52 Reply | Quote
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Not bad for a first attempt.

The glaring problem I noticed was that your noise channel dominated the entire piece, so I took the volume down a notch and made it decay more quickly.
Very minor change, but it makes it a little easier on the ears.

And since you are new and just figuring out Famitracker, everybody here and their mom will tell you to start out making covers to get the hang of it.

Definitely a good start!


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Posted: 2012-03-20 01:57 Reply | Quote
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oh haha, thank you. i uhh, i just realized i used the same instrument for square 1 as i did the noise channel, so i should PROBABLY go back and fix that nonsense. thanks a ton, though!

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