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I was feelin' a idea tonight, and I made a little track. Just something short and sweet. Kind of an beat-em-up street theme, I suppose. Plus, I wanted to work on my Triangle riffs more. :P
It's not much, and maybe it's missing something, but I dig how it turned out. Maybe you guys can opinionate on what it might be lacking.
the triangle seems really weird and dissonant in some parts, 06-07 especially i don't understand what's going on. the triangle from the previous frame just carries on into the next, which almost made me think that you had forgot to put something there.
well the idea itself isn't the problem, i just think that since it's such a low tone it doesn't really carry over well. there's plenty of music that has notes that carry over bars.
i think it's cos the verse part is a bit uneven and that tri carryover part comes too early. also, the tri's D note conflicts with the chord you're implying; it's setting up a tense hook with no proper 'release' and no follow up to keep the momentum flowing in a natural way.
i attached what i think makes it sound a little more 'right'.
i didn't really change much at all, just rearranged a few things. all the good ideas are already in there, just hoping to demonstrate that subtleties can go quite a ways.
not a big fan of the mixture between 3-3-3-3-4 beats and 4-4-4-4 beats where the channels as a whole lose emphasis and consistency but frames 08 & 09 are pretty neat
for example in frame 04 the beginning suonds too much like something coming out from a 3/4 song but then the lower half abruptly changes the rhythm
