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FamiTracker
I'm not one to read through loads of tutorials. I just like to and start
messing around. So this is the third song that I made. I think it is a improvement over my first two songs. Do think this song is great. Do you think it's garbage. Your constructive criticism is welcome.
You only like learning things on your own? Cool, another person like me =)
I like the song a lot (I suppose you've put a ton of effort into it). I find it to be a little slow (it takes too long until the good part starts playing), but I like the final product.
Considering you refuse reading tutorials (thus receiving a pretty small amount of external help, or none of it) I think it would be safe to say you have some talent.
I really hope you'll upload more songs!
EDIT: oh, and as said in the post below this one, the fact that the instruments have the same volume is a problem. It won't take much effort to do that.
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You would definitely benefit from some volume control. It's very hard to pick out a melody when all the sounds are competing with each other. It makes the song sound very cluttered.
There is SOME potential in you. Like golfertrytek mentioned you may want to start learning volume control. It really makes a world of a difference. I also found the song to be long, since the main riff never changes really. I put the track in speed 7 instead of 8 and already it gave it a little spice as well. Also for your long dragging notes, you could maybe try some Vibrato to give it more life.
Other than that it was pretty kool for a third track.
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