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Across The Sky (help) Posted: 2012-02-16 13:04

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Federigoo112

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#30438

my first serious composition, what do you think?

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Posted: 2012-02-16 15:16

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#30441

This is pretty good! A nice consistent style which gives it an airy-type feel and everything flows pretty well. It's a little bit repetitive in parts but overall it's really good. Nice work.

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Posted: 2012-02-16 15:47

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Oh yes! I was very much feeling I was up there in the Sky. I really enjoyed this track.

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Posted: 2012-02-16 17:11

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#30447

I agree with the others that you seem to have got that 'airy' feeling down nicely.
However, some of the runs strike me as being odd. The bassline is a bit static and the song itself is a bit repetitive too. However, aside from these minor gripes, this is not bad! Keep it up!

Posted: 2012-02-16 20:08

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I too found it repetitive, but then I changed the speed to 7, and that helped a lot.

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