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so i'll take it this is an attempt at follin styled music?
it's not horrible, but there are some really dissonant changes in your chord progression. Em > Dm is a fine idea, but it's going to clash clash clash unless you change your bassline to compensate for it. currently your triangle is repeating it's original pattern for both sections, and it makes your chords sound pretty bad. i think this could use a LOT more variation as well.
08-0A are pretty nice though, this isn't the worst attempt at follin style i've seen around by a long shot.
keep it up, and learn from your mistakes. i hear potential, but i also hear dissonance.
