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Moon - Duck Tales (My first Chiptune) Posted: 2012-02-02 12:58 Reply | Quote
Stormcloud23



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#29518
Hey guys, just wanted to upload my very first .ftm ever and get some feedback, it's a cover of the Moon stage from Duck Tales. Constructive criticism appreciated :D

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Posted: 2012-02-02 13:08 Reply | Quote
jrlepage
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#29519
You got many notes wrong, missed many beats and the noise drum sounds pretty awful without volume control. You got a decent start (in that I've seen much much worse from beginners, and your FTM actually contains what I'd call music) but you need lots and lots of practice and observation.
Posted: 2012-02-02 13:18 Reply | Quote
Necrophageon

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#29520
It sounds like it would sound good with some cleaning up.

You should really keep better track of your instruments... they appear to be running amok.
Posted: 2012-02-02 14:18 Reply | Quote
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#29521
note cuts r 4 suckaz
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Posted: 2012-02-02 22:29 Reply | Quote
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DuckTales Moon is weird because it starts out as 15 beats time for a few measures, then switches to 16 beats for the rest of the song.
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