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Niteland Posted: 2012-01-31 02:06  (Last Edited: 2012-04-26 21:55) Reply | Quote
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In the grand scheme of things, the soundtrack will be used for a Flash animation entitled "Niteland". Basically, the story is that there is an early-twenty year old man who earned the name of AWESOME MAN. He lives in a kingdom called Niteland which is ruled over by a king. However! There is a gang of thugs who call themselves the BADMEN who are unleashing havoc in the poor streets of humble old Niteland. The King sends Awesome Man to investigate the Badmen's supposed base and destroy it from the inside!

A friend of mine came up with that amazing story, so don't complain that I could've come up with something better. And I probably could've.

Now that I've gotten that out of the way, I would appreciate it if you were to tweak it in anyway you can, if you think it needs improvement.

PS. there's a doors song in there somewhere :}


EDIT - 4-26-2012
Started again. So far, I'm prouder of the new one.

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Posted: 2012-01-31 04:20 Reply | Quote
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So far, this is one hell of an OST. You also have VRC6 enabled; if you feel like using it, go for it. But, as fas as I can hear, this sounds perfect as a standard 2A03 track.

There are points where you can improve, but that's beyond my own skills (I humbly admit). This & the fact that my music style comes nowhere close to this rock style of yours (& I feel you've done a great job with this).

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Posted: 2012-02-11 21:42 Reply | Quote
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What needs improvement?

Posted: 2012-02-12 01:29 Reply | Quote
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Well, here's my list:

Track 1: I can see it being expanded into something bigger & with more syncopation (being such a small song as it currently is).

Track 5: I love the style & work you've put into this one; I feel you need to increase the 2A03 square channels' volume once you get to frame 07.

Track 6: I could picture this one sounding much richer if you use the VRC6 channels. You have a great intro from frames 00 to 02, but once you go into frame 03, your change in the 2A03 square channels changes the mood of your song a bit because you've lost a rich bass. I'd recommend you use the VRC6 square channels to continue the high-pitched lead tune, while you maintain the original bass in your intro.

Also, I gather you've had some difficulty creating an instrument for the VRC6 expansion; you need to place your notation cursor in one of the VRC6 channels before you add an instrument. You'll then enable two (more dynamic) square channels & a sawtooth channel that's great for additional bass.

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Posted: 2012-02-12 03:29 Reply | Quote
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Wowowow, #9 is totally Depth of Perception.

In a good way.

Posted: 2012-02-12 22:23 Reply | Quote
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Yeah I did that one purpose. Rushjet1 is my favorite chiptune artist.

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