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First 2012 song... Posted: 2012-01-14 01:11

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yucca70

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#28644

Well I was a little uneven on this one, but I decided to try seeing how it would do.

I'm tring to make a song kind of representing a volcano, or... something...

Anyways, I'm open to more criticism than usual.

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Posted: 2012-01-14 01:25

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You have improved, yucca. There's still some dischord and weird notes, but keep trying!

Posted: 2012-01-14 02:12 (Last Edited: 2012-01-14 03:53)

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[quote=moviemovies1]You have improved, yucca. There's still some dischord and weird notes, but keep trying![/quote]
I noticed that too, I could try to redo some notes and get some chords in it, thanks

EDIT- made some changes to the tri, I think it sounds a bit catchier

Edit 2- also, I had found a file that used VRC7 and sounds a bit swampy, It might sound better

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I've read up on all of my old forum posts, and I can not tell you all how grateful I am to have had your support and feedback in the past Smile

Thanks everyone! Keep on composing :D
~Yuccatosis

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Posted: 2012-01-14 13:45

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Hey Yucca70. Just wanted to tell you that when you compare your first works to your recent ones, you've come a long way. I see a lot of improvement from you. I also feel like you have great ideas in your head, but that you have trouble implementing them into the tracker. Because most of the time, when I read the titles of your songs, I really feel you are going the right direction, but you seem to get lazy, or just run out of ideas quickly. I see a lot of old patterns that keep coming back from your old FTM's. Don't be afraid to experiment with new things.

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Posted: 2012-01-16 05:58

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#28715

I've tried redoing neverkill, but it seems I just can't get a good flowing, longer rhythm. oh well.

I also have another song in there. out of boredom.

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I've read up on all of my old forum posts, and I can not tell you all how grateful I am to have had your support and feedback in the past Smile

Thanks everyone! Keep on composing :D
~Yuccatosis

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Posted: 2012-01-16 06:11

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#28717

Oh it happens to me a lot to...I can never finish my stuff.

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