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"A Light Rain" (This is an OC) Posted: 2012-01-09 16:52

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#28526

Thoughts/ criticism? If there's anything I can do to make this sound better, I want to take care of it before releasing this as a finished song.

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Posted: 2012-01-09 17:08

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This is pretty great! Right at the end of frame 13 there is some dissonance with the chord/melody/bass that sounds really weird, and most of your Qs are Q01- I'd recommend Q12 (and transpose them down another half step) as it usually sounds better.

Posted: 2012-01-10 16:49

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#28562

First of all, holycraprushjetlikesmyoc.

Secondly, I went through and fixed the bends and the dissonance, as well as making a few other changes. Thanks for the criticism! Here's the post-edited result. Is there anything else that needs fixing or does this feel like a finished product?

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Posted: 2012-01-13 16:41

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This is VERY good. Can't complain about anything.

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