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FamiTracker > General > Show Off Your Work > Oh, right. It's hockey season. Owner: golfertrytek New post
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Oh, right. It's hockey season. Posted: 2011-12-10 07:03 Reply | Quote
golfertrytek



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#27278
I mean really; who plays baseball in the winter?

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Posted: 2011-12-10 09:58 Reply | Quote
zephemeros

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#27283
Welcome to the forum!
I've never heard the music from these games before, but you seem to be quite good at making covers. Both this and your "rbi.ftm" cover sound pretty nice.
As for your originals you posted, I honestly don't think they're as bad as you made them out to be. My first suggestion to you would be to try using a different key than C major, but if you just started tracking they're all really good nevertheless.
Oh, and I'm not sure if anyone would have a problem with this, but it's always a good idea to have one post with lots of music as opposed to a few posts with less music in each one.
Keep tracking

regards, Zeph.
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Posted: 2011-12-10 17:57 Reply | Quote
Dwedit

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#27316
Frame #0, row 0A, the notes for Square 1&2 are one row too late.
Frame #0, row 1C, the arpeggio is a bit off.
Frame #1, row 32, Square 2: should be B-3, not C-4.
Frame #2, row 20, Square 2: Should be G-3, not A-3.

Not bad!
Posted: 2011-12-10 18:01 Reply | Quote
kinkinkijkin

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#27317
[quote=zephemeros]try using a different key than C major[/quote]
This is the most important thing I have ever seen said to someone on their first day.

Btw nice cover.
Posted: 2011-12-11 04:29 Reply | Quote
golfertrytek



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#27344
I started tracking around 3 months ago and have no musical background whatsoever, so thanks for the tip. I didn't even know I was only using C Major.
Posted: 2011-12-11 04:30 Reply | Quote
golfertrytek



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#27345
I started tracking around 3 months ago and have no musical background whatsoever, so thanks for the tip. I didn't even know I was only using C Major.
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