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listen to the whole thing. plz. TALK Posted: 2011-11-22 21:53 Reply(Locked)
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i really do like hearing feed back even though i have for the most part just been shunned.

how ever i have learned a lot from people telling he stuff on this forum.

so yea, this is my song.. i love it it makes me happy and was stuck in my head today. but im sure other opinions will vary so let hear it.

remember. i really want people to listen to the whole thing before commenting.



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Posted: 2011-11-22 21:54 Reply(Locked)
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Better.

RE: listen to the whole thing. plz. TALK Posted: 2011-11-22 21:56  (Last Edited: 2011-11-22 21:57) Reply(Locked)
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[quote=iGotno_scope]remember. i really want people to listen to the whole thing before commenting. [/quote]
I listened to all of it.

And I still think you should find a new hobby, sorry...

If you want constructive feedback, then I suppose you could start by teaching yourself some music theory, learning how different sounds go together and how some do not (like those you used in your tune, for instance). Understanding how time signatures and key signatures work would be a good thing to have in your musical baggage too. Just google "learn music theory", I'm sure you'll find something of interest.

Chiptunes and trackers in general probably aren't a good place to start making music to begin with. I suggest you try a notation program like Noteworthy, Finale, or something similar. That way you can really get to understand how music is really made before moving on to more complex and obscure forms of music-making (which trackers are a part of).

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Posted: 2011-11-22 21:57 Reply(Locked)
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[quote=kinkinkijkin]Better.[/quote]
thanks. but i can i ask what you like better? or what makes it better?

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I like the fact that the damage is minor this time instead of raping.

RE: listen to the whole thing. plz. TALK Posted: 2011-11-22 22:11 Reply(Locked)
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[quote=jrlepage][quote=iGotno_scope]remember. i really want people to listen to the whole thing before commenting. [/quote]
I listened to all of it.

And I still think you should find a new hobby, sorry...

If you want constructive feedback, then I suppose you could start by teaching yourself some music theory, learning how different sounds go together and how some do not (like those you used in your tune, for instance). Understanding how time signatures and key signatures work would be a good thing to have in your musical baggage too. Just google "learn music theory", I'm sure you'll find something of interest.

Chiptunes and trackers in general probably aren't a good place to start making music to begin with. I suggest you try a notation program like Noteworthy, Finale, or something similar. That way you can really get to understand how music is really made before moving on to more complex and obscure forms of music-making (which trackers are a part of).[/quote]

cool. well no. im not going to find other hobbies and i have played guitar for over 5 years im not completely ignorant with music theory

im going to continue making this crazy stuff then after a while my style will be so sick that you will be like damn suuun that shit is so sick i dont even get it. i will be like bro its ok.. you dont have to. then i will hand you some clean undies, swear man one day when my tracker music gets zipped up and it all makes sense to you, when my style finds its feet. you will nut your pants and be like. yea dude the only way to get good at that style is to never.. ever learn the generic "teach you tracker music styles".

i want music that your head hears not you body i will get there one day. fo sho

but yea dont tell me to find a new hobbie you really think the guy who make 4 accounts on here because of how many times i got banned is going to just stop? really.

na bro.. i fell in love with the tracker and i know how to use famitracker more then the others ones so yea.

it would be nice if you guys could see past your music box and give me real advice, but out musical goals might be so difference we cant even comprehend each others.

because most of the music i see on here im like yea this show well understating of music theory and effects and a large understanding of trackers but.. where is the swagga? you know what i mean?
like the originality. and amazing ness? that makes my mind toss the beat and catch it, ya know?

wow i just typed like a page.. lolzz

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RE: listen to the whole thing. plz. TALK Posted: 2011-11-22 22:16  (Last Edited: 2011-11-22 22:49) Reply(Locked)
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[quote=iGotno_scope]fo sho[/quote]
This is where your post lost all its credibility. Not that it had much to begin with...

And I'm not buying the guitar for 5 years shite, sorry. Anybody with even the slightest amount of musical background would know what you're making is a pitiful excuse for music and would be ashamed to post it. Besides, playing guitar for however many years does not instantly grant you any sort of talent whatsoever for composing music, at all.

It's fine to begin with music, mind you; there's no reason to be ashamed of that. I still stand behind my previous post where I said it would be a good idea for you to learn more about how music is made and how it works, as well as how it's put together in a way that makes sense and is pleasant to hear, before using trackers. It doesn't matter if you've "fallen in love with the tracker" or anything, you still should wait until you're fully comfortable with writing down ideas before you use one.

[quote=iGotno_scope]it would be nice if you guys could see past your music box and give me real advice[/quote]
I've given you 'real advice', and it didn't require much out-of-the-box thinking: your music isn't good. Learn about music so you make better music that actually makes sense to anyone other than you. It's simple, really, and not difficult to comprehend no matter where you're coming from.

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RE: listen to the whole thing. plz. TALK Posted: 2011-11-22 22:17 Reply(Locked)
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Try to put less note, but more meaningful one. Don't play the same note on more than one channel so often; try chords or at least power chords (for example, C with G). As for the rhythm, try not to be all over the place; choose some rhythmic figure and stick with them. Ah and for the V effect, only V00, V01, V02 and V03 works on the 2ao3. Try to put some one-channel echo in your song, it could be good. Put bassline in your music; A lower voice leading the song in a harmonic way. Don't double the melody with the bass. Try to fit your bass drum with the bass. Use more effects.

I made a simple edit on frame 00, from 00 to 32. Hope this helps.


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RE: listen to the whole thing. plz. TALK Posted: 2011-11-22 22:20  (Last Edited: 2011-11-22 22:21) Reply(Locked)
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[quote=iGotno_scope]im going to continue making this crazy stuff then after a while my style will be so sick that you will be like damn suuun that shit is so sick i dont even get it. i will be like bro its ok.. you dont have to. then i will hand you some clean undies, swear man one day when my tracker music gets zipped up and it all makes sense to you, when my style finds its feet. you will nut your pants and be like. yea dude the only way to get good at that style is to never.. ever learn the generic "teach you tracker music styles".[/quote]
[u][i][b]BEST KIND OF QUOTE[/b][/i][/u]

OMFG

yeah this is going in my sig

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[quote=iGotno_scope]im going to continue making this crazy stuff then after a while my style will be so sick that you will be like damn suuun that shit is so sick i dont even get it. i will be like bro its ok.. you dont have to.[/quote]
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holy fuck I'm laughing so hard

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People like you make me ashamed to be a part of this generation.
learn proper english and then come back, please.



Posted: 2011-11-23 01:17 Reply(Locked)
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nigga u best be jokin

i feel excited and happy right now. Posted: 2011-11-23 02:07 Reply(Locked)
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It doesn't matter if you've "fallen in love with the tracker">>>> >>>>yes it matters. because thats what going to keep me opening famitracker on my pc

you still should wait until you're fully comfortable with writing down ideas before you use one>>>> >>>>not true

I've given you 'real advice', and it didn't require much out-of-the-box thinking>>>> >>>>not true

[quote=Velathnos]Try to put less note, but more meaningful one. Don't play the same note on more than one channel so often; try chords or at least power chords (for example, C with G). As for the rhythm, try not to be all over the place; choose some rhythmic figure and stick with them. Ah and for the V effect, only V00, V01, V02 and V03 works on the 2ao3. Try to put some one-channel echo in your song, it could be good. Put bassline in your music; A lower voice leading the song in a harmonic way. Don't double the melody with the bass. Try to fit your bass drum with the bass. Use more effects.

I made a simple edit on frame 00, from 00 to 32. Hope this helps.[/quote]>>>> >>>>thanks i understand what your talking about and ima try and use that in my next song. yes and your edit sounds really cool.

[quote=InterrobangPie][quote=iGotno_scope]im going to continue making this crazy stuff then after a while my style will be so sick that you will be like damn suuun that shit is so sick i dont even get it. i will be like bro its ok.. you dont have to. then i will hand you some clean undies, swear man one day when my tracker music gets zipped up and it all makes sense to you, when my style finds its feet. you will nut your pants and be like. yea dude the only way to get good at that style is to never.. ever learn the generic "teach you tracker music styles".[/quote]
[u][i][b]BEST KIND OF QUOTE[/b][/i][/u]

OMFG

yeah this is going in my sig[/quote]>>>> >>>>so true its now living a second life as your sig.

[quote=psn]holy fuck I'm laughing so hard[/quote]>>>> >>>>im glad my post was the fist step in many for your laughter being created at that moment. very glad

[quote=zephemeros]People like you make me ashamed to be a part of this generation.
learn proper english and then come back, please.

[/quote]>>>> >>>>you did say please. however. na bro.. just ... ...na

[quote=Ares64]nigga u best be jokin[/quote]naa nigga you know


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Posted: 2011-11-23 03:05  (Last Edited: 2011-11-23 03:16) Reply(Locked)
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I agree with jrlepage; from from my experiences, I believe music theory and listening to different kinds of music would help.

Do keep at it though... I don't think it matters how good at a hobby you are, but how much you enjoy it.

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Posted: 2011-11-23 03:58  (Last Edited: 2011-11-23 04:12) Reply(Locked)
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iGotno_scope: I'm not trolling, but jrlepage is right. If you claim to have played guitar for 5 years, then you should obviously know something about music theory. Just by the fact that you asked on this forum "which key signature is the best" only calls out your bluff, as far as I'm concerned.

Aside from the obvious fact that you should enjoy what you're doing, the only way to get good with any style is to get good with music; the only way to get good with music is to be serious about it & teach yourself what others can't/won't teach you. Or, if you really did play the guitar for 5 years, maybe stick with the guitar & then come back; if you can at least play Yankee Doodle on your guitar, then you should be able to copy the notes (or tabs) from your book into FamiTracker.

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