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Groove Cave (VRC6 Original) Posted: 2011-11-20 08:11 Reply | Quote
BattleBeard



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I think this is my best original so far.

Please, critize to your heart's content!
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Posted: 2011-11-20 08:17 Reply | Quote
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i critisize that someone should make "foxy lady" on the famitracker. that would be cool.
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Posted: 2011-11-20 08:26  (Last Edited: 2011-11-20 08:27) Reply | Quote
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Frames 07, 09, and 0B sound very discorded. Always remember that if you're going to change the key of one channel, you must change the key of all others with it as well or else it just doesn't sound right. A quick fix in your case would be highlighting all the notes in vrc6 squares 1 and 2 for pattern 1, right clicking and selecting "Decrease Notes" (if you don't already know about this, of course.)

Your melody also sounds significantly quieter than your bassline. Repetitive arpeggios should never overpower your melody; it makes the song sound very unpleasant to listen to.

Other than that, It is a very large improvement from what I remember you showing. Still could use some work, however.
Posted: 2011-11-20 08:31  (Last Edited: 2011-11-20 08:45) Reply | Quote
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failed attachement
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Posted: 2011-11-20 08:37  (Last Edited: 2011-11-20 08:49) Reply | Quote
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It sounds exactly the same as before

EDIT: I added an ftm to show an example of what I mean.

also, you can't control the volume of the triangle. don't even bother trying. The echo of your melody was not placed in the correct position, either.

I think you should look into creating more dynamic instruments. It may help you out a little.

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Posted: 2011-11-20 08:44 Reply | Quote
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Darn it, why didn't it SAVE?!?!

Ah well.

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Posted: 2011-11-20 08:53 Reply | Quote
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Hey man, I like this. Simple yet effective. Much improved sir. Keep it up!
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Posted: 2011-11-20 08:58 Reply | Quote
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Thanks--HOLY SHIZ FEZUKE

Thanks!
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Posted: 2011-12-03 20:02 Reply | Quote
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#26977
I just want to know if you mind me playing around with this song? I've had this riff in my head for a while at work and I feel the urge to construct around it.

I won't post anything unless I have your OK BattleBeard.
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Posted: 2011-12-03 20:30 Reply | Quote
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It's fine, sure why not
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Posted: 2011-12-03 20:46  (Last Edited: 2011-12-05 02:28) Reply | Quote
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#26981
Thanks for your approval.

I don't think i'm done yet, but i'll post a preview for now.


Why do I love this riff so much? It's beyond me......You've got me going insane.
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