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Another typical newb covering Kraid's Theme... Posted: 2011-10-16 00:01  (Last Edited: 2011-10-16 08:47) Reply | Quote
Jawnsunn

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#24353
Title says all.
Anyway, this is my first(or second, I don't know) time using Famitracker. I probably missed a few notes on this or something.
Oh, and contains DPCM drums from Jackal
EDIT 1:Go down bottom posts to see the latest.


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Posted: 2011-10-16 00:09 Reply | Quote
kinkinkijkin

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#24354
Don't be hard on yourself.

I almost got banned for being hard on myself.

Anyways some newbs can't cover at all... I consider this kind of a feat since the only people posting kraid's theme covers here are older members. No lie.

Posted: 2011-10-16 00:20 Reply | Quote
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Heh, it sounds so strange to hear Kraid's theme with a drumbeat.
Aside from a few wrong notes and some issues with the volume, this is nice for a beginner! Good job.

Posted: 2011-10-16 01:19  (Last Edited: 2011-10-16 01:25) Reply | Quote
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(k4 now with a pony avatar? Does that make 4 people now? Seems they just needed someone to break the ice~~~)

I had to mute the DPCM. It doesn't sound right at all.

Frames 06 and 09 shouldn't exist.

In the triangle your octaves are the wrong way round. A few wrong notes too - frame 04 triangle row 0C, frame 07 triangle row 0A, and pretty much all of frame 0C.

Posted: 2011-10-16 05:17  (Last Edited: 2011-10-16 06:43) Reply | Quote
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"in the triangle your octives are wrong way around. a few wrong notes too - frame 04 triangle row oc frame 07 triangle row 0a and prettt much all of frame 0c"

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Posted: 2011-10-16 05:30  (Last Edited: 2011-10-16 06:44) Reply | Quote
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[quote=bomono][video][/quote]

Can you guys kindly stop posting random pictures and videos as responses to someones posts? It's kind of irritating and pretty much completely pointless.

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Posted: 2011-10-16 06:38 Reply | Quote
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Jawnsunn: the tune is alright, but it does need more work (take InterrobangPie's suggestion & also have a search on the forum for the multiple Kraid's Theme covers that exists). Also, the drum beat's a little loud for the song (disregarding the fact that the original had no drums).

bomono: I'm with Raijin on (except for the fact that it's "pretty much" pointless, because it IS pointless).

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Posted: 2011-10-16 06:39  (Last Edited: 2011-10-16 06:43) Reply | Quote
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[quote=bomono]"in the triangle your octives are wrong way around. a few wrong notes too - frame 04 triangle row oc frame 07 triangle row 0a and prettt much all of frame 0c"

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Don't do this. Pie was giving constructive criticism here.

Posted: 2011-10-16 08:02  (Last Edited: 2011-10-16 08:05) Reply | Quote
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sorry i found the video and wanted to troll using it as soon as possible sorry hope u dont hate me D:

as for the cover kill me but i never heard of this song before (gets bombarded by hate) sorry i just never liked metroidvannia style games nor did i like metroids soundtrack D:

Posted: 2011-10-16 08:19  (Last Edited: 2011-10-16 08:36) Reply | Quote
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Thanks guys for the criticism!
Yeah, my triangle octaves were opposite, and I lol'd when I heard the original triangle parts.
Kind of getting a hang of this program now.

Bomono:It's cool bro. Curious about the video, but I honestly don't want to ask.

EDIT:Updated with fixes and changes to the DCPM and Tri channels


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Posted: 2011-10-16 14:06 Reply | Quote
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Frame 02 should be repeated. Frame 05 should be deleted. Frame 07 should be repeated twice. Frame 0A should be repeated. The squares in frame 0A are still wrong. Bonomo fails at being a troll.

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